Grimes, Nikki. 2002. DANITRA BROWN LEAVES TOWN. New York: Harper Collins. ISBN 0-688-13156-5
PLOT SUMMARY
In this book of poetry, Grimes has produced an engaging group of poems centered among the test of time that friendships must sometimes endure. The young characters that are best friends, Zuri and Danitra, are separated during summer vacation while Danitra heads for the country to visit relatives and leaves Zuri back home in the city. Danitra’s excitement about going away rubs Zuri the wrong way. Once Zuri realizes the innocent intentions of Denitra they are able to move forward by sending letters in the mail to keep each other up to date. Zuri learns to appreciate the friendship of a new girl, Nina, and has fun dancing at a block party, playing softball and showing off in front of the boys. Danitra relishes sleeping under the stars, learning to garden, and hanging out at her family reunion. Each girl has their own separate summer fun, but is thrilled to see each other and continue with their friendship where they last left off. Young people will relate with the genuine high and low emotions and experiences that are authenticated in this poetry bundle.
CRITICAL ANALYSIS
The rhythm that Grimes uses throughout this book is mixed. Some of her poems are short lines that help create a staccato rhythm, and others are written with free verse allowing the couplets to flow. The rhyme is created differently in each poem. Some have words that rhyme at the end of the lines, while others seem naturally written in a flow that is still easy to understand without any rhyme present. Assonance sounds using short vowel and long vowel sounds are scattered by Grimes in her poems. In a poem titled “First Night,” a few of the lines read, “Clusters of fireflies, dancing ‘round my head, keeping me from bed, for hours.” The short e vowel sound is repeated in the words head and bed found at the end of the lines. Grimes also use similes as she writes in the same poem, “And the sky! I’ve never seen one so blue-black, like a thick overcoat all buttoned up with stars.” She also uses an echo of words in places that bring a stronger meaning.
The imagery displayed in the poems throughout the book come to life more critically with the help of the illustrations. The influence of the African-American ethnicity and culture are at the heart of every poem told. In one of the poems called, “Block Party,” it says, “In a blink I become a hip-swinging, head-bobbing, foot-stomping, fancy-dancing fool.” Creating an image with these words in my head, pulling from my own personal experiences and visually seeing the illustration on the page with this poem, allows my mind to freely see this poem rolling live in my head as the story is told. Each poem has a double page spread illustration that details or acts out the interpretation of the poem that has been mounted somewhere in the picture’s scene. The illustrations are dimensional with much detail and illicit a soft watercolor touch.
The realistic feelings that are captured in the friendship at stake in this compilation of poems are truly worthy for children ages 8 and up to read. An older reader will be able to better understand the feelings and emotions exchanged between the two girls, but all will be engaged with the drama and action expressed. Everyone can learn or be reminded of what it feels like to be left out from something that you wanted badly to be a part of.
REVIEW EXCERPT(S)
Georgia Children’s Book Award, 2004-2005; Nominee
Texas Bluebonnet Award, 2004-2005; Nominee
Best Children’s Books of the Year, 2003; Bank Street College of Education; United States
Horn Book: “Cooper's muted illustrations in this picture book capture the personalities of the two young friends.”
Kirkus Review: “Grimes’s poems read and flow well, and Cooper’s paintings simply burst with energy and expressiveness.”
Booklist: “ Kids will see that both friends travel far and welcome each other home.”
Children’s Literature: “The final picture of Danitra and Zuri hugging is accompanied by a poem that's sure to ring true with other friends.”
CONNECTIONS
*At the beginning of the school year, complete a unit of study on “Friendship.” In addition to sharing Danitra Brown Leaves Town, also share the books Enemy Pie by Derek Munson, How to Lose All Your Friends by Nancy Carlson, and My Mouth Is a Volcano by Julia Cook.
*Have students share situations where they have gotten hurt feelings before in a friendship.
*Have the teacher read various scenarios to students of how someone got their feelings hurt. These should be legitimate situations as well as situations with misunderstanding or interpreting the information.
*Have students pair up and role play a scenario to the class that involves a situation between friends that will need to be resolved. After seeing the scenario acted out, have the audience(students) decide what has happened and the best way to “mend” the situation.
*Create a form for students to complete and submit to a box when they want to brag on someone for being a good friend and how they have shown that. It can be called, “Friends have heart.”