Holm, Jennifer L. 2010. TURTLE IN PARADISE. New York: Random House. ISBN 978-0-375-93688-3
PLOT SUMMARY
Turtle is an eleven-year-old girl who lives with her single mother that cleans houses for a living. Her mother is always dreaming about hitting it big, being in love, and someday living in a “made to order” house. When Turtle’s mom begins work at a new home, she ends up sending Turtle to live with her Aunt Minnie in Key West, Florida because the homeowner doesn’t like children.
Turtle has never met this part of her family, but is quickly indoctrinated into the different culture of life that exists. Her cousins are all boys and slowly warm up to her and include her in most of their activities, except being part of the “Diaper Gang.” As time passes while in Key West, Turtle learns that her grandmother really isn’t dead and that a man nick-named, Slow Poke, has the exact same grayish blue eye color that she has.
The real excitement materializes when Shadow, Turtle’s cat, helps lead her to a hidden treasure map. Turtle shares the map with her cousins and they venture out to find the treasure as they get stranded on an island during a hurricane. After the weather calms, the kids are found and they reveal the gold coins they found and are able to sell them for $20,000. The money is used to buy Johnny Cakes a new boat that the kids lost in the ocean and is then split fairly between them, including a share to Nana Philly because it was her house where Turtle found the map.
To add to the excitement, Turtle’s mother comes to Key West and introduces her new husband, Archie. Turtle is ecstatic to see her mother and happy because she has always liked Archie when he was her mother’s boyfriend. After Turtle, her mother and Archie spend the night in a deluxe hotel before leaving Key West to live life happily ever after, Turtle and her mother say their good-byes to all the family as Archie stays behind, goes to the bank and gets the luggage to the dock.
Ultimately, Archie turns out to be a lying thief and sneaks out of the Keys without Turtle and her mother, but with Turtle’s newly found money. Turtle and her mother are saddened when the reality of what just happened sinks in, but both realize they are better off staying behind and being surrounded by family which is more meaningful than any amount of money.
CRITICAL ANALYSIS
The characters in this book seem real and believable. The protagonist character, Turtle, experiences living life in Key West for the first time. As she learns the ways of life like always going barefooted, that most people are called by a nickname, and being aware that scorpions are abundant and you should always shake your clothes out before putting them on allows the reader to also get a detailed idea of life in Key West through eleven-year-old Turtle’s experiences first-hand. Other characters in the story include her mother who is working hard as a live-in housekeeper to make ends meet financially, the mom’s boyfriend Archie that is a walking salesman, and all of the relatives (aunts, uncles, boy-cousins, grandmother and birth-father) that Turtle meets when she goes to live in Key West, Florida.
The plot of the story is very realistic to its 1935 time period. The poor, economic stricken times are clearly represented by how Turtle’s boy-cousins use their imaginations to have fun and cleverly create a business called the “Diaper Club” that takes crying babies on wagon rides to give their mothers a few sane minutes in exchange for payment via candy. Dreams of “striking it rich” are thought about often in this story by old and young alike. With so much family around to interact with each other, drama abounds throughout the story.
The backdrop of this novel happens in Key West, Florida and is very easy to picture. Holm’s is constantly describing various places within the island that Turtle is exposed to, yet cleverly words these descriptions through Turtle’s own perception of what her eyes see. The choice of words used in much of the dialogue between Turtle and her newly discovered family members is spoken so that the reader can actually visualize how family talks to family and the literal frankness that exists in the voices of Turtle and all of her cousins. For example, they use the word “bungy” to describe a person’s bottom, most specifically referencing all of the babies that they help take care of including the changing of diapers. The Diaper Gang has a secret remedy they use to clear up diaper rash and they capitalize on the enjoyment they get from all of the mothers in the neighborhood that come knocking to request some.
The notes that Holms shares at the end of the story explaining what brought her to write this historical fiction novel are very interesting. She includes various black and white photographs that give examples of what a typical Conch neighborhood in Key West would have looked like, pictures of real people that helped inspire some of her characters, and background information with how the Great Depression influenced this specific part of the Nation. Holm’s discloses what the secret diaper rash formula consists of in her notes and claims that it works on mosquito bites, too! This book was very easy to read and digest. The language used was very understandable. The careful research that Holm’s did to write this book allowed her to dig deep and learn about her own family heritage in Key West that began when her great-grandmother emigrated there.
AWARDS & REVIEW EXCERPT(S)
Newbery Honor Book 2011
Children’s Choices for 2011
Children’s Books of the Year 2011
Horn Book starred: “Modern-day readers will have no trouble relating to Turtle, though, and the fast-moving plot will keep them interested to the end.”
Book List starred: “The many references to 1930s entertainments (Terry and the Pirates, Shirley Temple) will mostly go over kids’ heads, but they’ll get how much comics and movies meant to a population desperate for smiles.”
Kirkus Review starred: “Holm's voice for Turtle is winning and authentic--that of a practical, clear-eyed observer--and her nimble way with dialogue creates laugh-out-loud moments. Sweet, funny and superb.”
Library Media Connection: “This book is best suited as a read-aloud where the background of the story has already been established.”
Publishers Weekly: “Two-time Newbery Honor author Holm again crafts a winning heroine who, despite her hardened exterior, gradually warms to her eccentric family members, including her unruly cousins and waspish grandmother (who Turtle thought was dead). Infused with period pop culture references, a strong sense of place, and the unique traditions and culture of Key West natives (aka "Conchs"), this humorous adventure effectively portrays Turtle as caught between her mother's Hollywood-inspired dreams and the very real family and geography that offer a different kind of paradise.”
School Library Journal: “Readers who enjoy melodic, humorous tales of the past won't want to miss it.”
CONNECTIONS
*Make a cost analysis comparison to finding what $20,000 back in the 1930’s would amount from inflation to today’s date.
*Re-create a 4-D map of what the Key West Island that Turtle’s family lived on looked like, including the streets and houses that were mentioned in the book, as well as where the hidden treasure was found.
*Using a map to teach latitude and longitude, locate the coordinating points to find hidden treasures.
*Take a virtual field trip on the Internet and watch hurricane footage that has been captured on video. Do the same for learning about tornadoes. Compare the two by creating a Venn diagram.
*Read the book I SURVIVED HURRICANE KATRINA.
*Determine if the economic ruin of Key West back in 1934 has changed and been reinvented as a tourist attraction or if it remains a financial sinking hole.
*Encourage students to read other historical novels written by Jennifer L. Holm like Our Only May Amelia, Penny From Heaven, Boston Jane: An Adventure, The Trouble With May Amelia, Boston Jane: The Claim, and Boston Jane: Wilderness Days.
*Have students reflect and discuss the following questions:
Contemporary Significance: How important was it to people at the time, perhaps in finding lost treasures?
Profundity: How deeply were people affected?
Quantity: How many people were affected?
Durability: How long lasting were the effects?
Relevance: How does it help us understand current issues and events?